Ok so I'm at school and I'm trying to think of a good name for the main character and I just can't think of a good name....
I also need work on what very well may be my favorite part of my story. The part when he encounters his parents. It is going to be loosely based off of the pink floyd song "Welcome to the Machine." I'm thinking of making him wander though the town (which I've decided it going to be called Ashen Point), and he encounters the only place in the town that looks intact. He enters and it is a weird looking "machine shop," and there is steam coming from all over the place, and he's walking down a long hallway with wall covered with pipes and machinery. As he walks through, he hears the voice of his father. He enter a huge room with a chair in the middle. He doesn't realise it but in that chair is sitting his father's spirit. That is really all i can think of for that scene hopefully it'll come out right. I can picture it but it's kinda hard to write it out...