If i do have him talking of his parents, his foster parents will want to take him to his biological parents, perhaps either ending his nighttime disturbances or finding out why he sleep talks and that kind of stuff. Im hoping to find some kind of town name that could be passable as a creepy town name it doesn't have to be real. I think on their journey the kid should randomly begin hearing voices in his head as they begin to get closer to the town his biological parents supposedly live.
The voices torment him into running off away from his foster parents when they stop at a motel one night. He keeps running until he sees a sign "Welcome to (need that creepy town name here)." As he enters he feels strange, but upon passing the sign he blacks out. He wakes up later in what can only be described as a factory from long ago. I'm lost from here i haven't really thought past here...input? output? throughput?

I don't think they should be worried about the sleep walking until the kid like wanders out of the house and almost gets hit by a car or something like that.
ReplyDeleteAnd as the voices get worse he should become moody. and creepy.
It also might be a little more dramatic if he doesn't know its his parents at first, then he could strat remmebering things that never happened to him and he could get curious, about whether the voices are his real parents or not, which would give his foster parents more of a reason to wanna take him there...
And as he gets closer to the town he should start hallucinating and seeing things and maybe dreaming about his parents murder. Because they should totally be dead. LoL
And I think it would be dramatic if they their driving down the road and something runs across the road and they swurve and the foster parents die and the kid wakes up to find his people dead in front of the sign that says "welcome to, whatever." cause that would just be weird.
and maybe the shadow could be like his alter ego or his evil twin or something.....
But anyway, I think it's a good, but exceptionally vague start. lol. Hope you like my ideas. I promise not to be offended when you don't use any of them. <3
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ReplyDeleteHere are some town name generators that might help you:
http://k4-pacific.com/nametown.php
http://www.geocities.com/terrorsmartyr/boe/citynames.html
http://www.inkalicious.com/elizabethan.html
http://nine.frenchboys.net/country.php
Wow Celes, you would know exactly who that was right away. LoL
ReplyDeleteDing ding ding we have a winner
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